4.1 Structure and Style: Why are They Important in Writing?

Imagine you are in the kitchen preparing dinner for the night. You open your refrigerator to see whether there are any frozen meats and vegetables. Before shutting the door, you turn around and look at the small stacks of items on the counter. You pause for a moment and ask yourself an important question: are the spices and sauces enough for tonight’s recipes?

The same logic applies to writing. In every form of writing, a good structure demonstrates organized thinking and clear expression of the message being conveyed. In formal writing, especially in academic and business contexts, the message should be clear, direct, and easy for the audience to follow. You may vary paragraph structures, such as by presenting a rebuttal or an argument, to strengthen the reader’s understanding and emotional engagement. The formal rules have one goal: to communicate the message in a compact and engaging way. Therefore, structure in any written form should promote coherence, persuasion, and impact. Some argue that creative writing does not follow a structure. The answer is no. Creative writing, such as poems, plays, and novels, also follows structural patterns. For example, rhyming regulates the sound of poems; plays are written in scenes; and novels often follow a sequence of rising action, climax, catastrophe, and resolution. Again, a good structure helps readers understand the idea or message and reflect on it.

In formal writing, structure creates a pattern of cohesion and appropriateness. By adding or subtracting parts carefully, the overall structure remains balanced and effective. The introduction, or opening paragraph, explains the reason for the writing and sets up the scenario or topic. It usually begins with a thesis statement that presents the main idea of the article. This is followed by body paragraphs that provide supporting facts and ideas. Each paragraph should begin with a topic sentence. The topic sentence does not need to be lengthy, but it should be direct and focused. You may then provide reasons and supporting statements, making sure that each paragraph stays aligned with its topic sentence. Do not overload a paragraph with too many ideas. In some cases, you may include a transition or counterargument paragraph to improve the flow of your article. If you do so, you should have a valid reason for addressing an opposing viewpoint. You can then develop the counterargument by responding to it and defending your position. For the conclusion, you should summarize and reaffirm your ideas to leave a final impression on the reader. This is a common procedure in formal writing, including scholarly papers, academic essays, business letters, and proposals. The principles of formal structure should always remain in your mind while writing.

A sample writing structure is as follows:

1.        Title

2.        Introduction

i)            Opening sentence to introduce the topic

ii)         Background or context

iii)      Thesis statement that presents the main idea or purpose

3.        Body Paragraph 1

                                                i.                  Topic sentence stating the main point

                                             ii.                  Supporting explanation

                                          iii.                  Evidence, example, or detail

                                          iv.                  Link back to the main idea

4.        Body Paragraph 2

                                                i.                  Topic sentence introducing the second point

                                             ii.                  Supporting explanation

                                          iii.                  Evidence, example, or detail

                                          iv.                  Clear connection to the thesis

5.        Counterargument or Transition Paragraph (optional)

                                                i.                  Acknowledge an opposing view or shift in focus

                                             ii.                  Respond to or refute the opposing point

                                          iii.                  Reinforce your position

6.        Conclusion

                                                i.                  Restate the thesis in different words

                                             ii.                  Summarize the main points

                                          iii.                  Final thought, recommendation, or closing statement

I have one final tip for business writing: use precise and clear statements that are short and concise. This is a golden rule for career success because your colleagues and managers may not have time to read a page-long complaint or a proposal the size of a booklet. Try to practice writing in plain English for better understanding. I would also recommend using bullet points, when appropriate, as a practical way to improve convenience and readability. But how do we make our ideas precise and clear? It is through the art of writing with a strong and effective style.

Style enhances the tone, clarity, and overall quality of writing. Every author makes choices about vocabulary, sentence structure, level of formality, and the way the audience is addressed. An appropriate style enables a writer to convey ideas more effectively by aligning language with the intended purpose and context. In academic and professional settings, for instance, a measured and precise style often enhances credibility and supports a clearer interpretation of the message. In your daily reading, you may notice differences between British English and American English, and you may recognize them instinctively. The same idea can be expressed differently depending on cultural or linguistic background. Consider the following examples: 1) (British English) “If you see something that does not look right, speak to staff or contact the police.” 2) (American English) “If you see something, say something; please report suspicious items, behavior, or activity to onboard personnel, or contact the police immediately.” These are both examples of announcements made on trains. What differences do you notice in the writing? The first statement is shorter than the second. Yet the first addresses the situation broadly through the phrase “does not look right,” while the second refers more specifically to “suspicious items, behavior, or activity.” Both are grammatically correct, but as a passenger, you may sense a different level of urgency or attention in each version because of style and culture.

Your communication style reflects your learning background and your experience with English. Back in college, one of my entry-level English literature professors used to complain that my analytical essays sounded dull. I was confused, so I went to see an English writing tutor for further guidance. My writing was grammatically correct, and the reasoning and logic were well aligned and structured. So, what went wrong? I later discovered that the issue was simple: I expressed myself in a polite and highly structured way with a polished British style, but my professor was American with an Irish background. That background influenced expectations about tone, humor, and indirectness in communication. Once I understood this, I changed my learning approach. I began reading newspapers daily, watching investigative news programs, and following local dramas to better understand localized English usage. After a long period of learning and adjustment, I was eventually invited to help other students in class. Another clash of style happened later in my workplace. I was focused on writing a weekly newsletter when I overheard a colleague drafting an apology email that began with “I hereby kindly apologize...” to address work that did not meet expectations. A Canadian colleague replied, “It’s fine, don’t worry about it... I am Canadian; we don’t apologize like that.” I found the exchange amusing. Repeated apologizing for a minor issue was simply not considered a typical Canadian style in that context. This is not a racial matter; rather, it shows that communication style changes according to culture and background.

Structure and style go hand in hand in writing because they shape your connection with readers. A good structure provides a clear framework for the logical development of ideas and supporting points. A good writing style sharpens your voice through your choice of tone, vocabulary, and form. Together, they help you communicate effectively and meaningfully. In the upcoming chapter, I will provide more detail about the technical use of style in a general way.

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